Game Commentary?

[Antwan]

So I'm really new to this..
I've done a little bit of voice over before but nothing the length of a game playthrough.
I have the game recorded in parts and I've got my quality fairly decent.
I'm not sure about my voice though.. Too loud? Dislikes are fair game, just tell me what's up.
Part 2 On the way and this game gets so much crazier. Could use the feedback toward the rest of this.
I hope to get better and maybe make some money down the line but one step at a time.
Took me a while to get this far but I'm psyched. So if you get 10 minutes to lend eyes and ears
let me know if there's anything I could improve on. Later, Happy gaming.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_8XceV0aTiw

[MarcoPoloUSN]

This is good Antwan. You have a good delivery, and from an audience perspective, you seem very likable.
Quality and voice volume are fine. However, you could always work to get a better video output (to show you're editing is progressing).
I like your optimistic approach to the game itself (no complaining that the game is bad, poorly developed, etc.)
I'm not into this particular game, but it would be nice to see more commentated games from someone I'm familiar with.

[Antwan]

Thanks Marco.
Commentary Kind of crossed between a walkthrough and a playthrough
It's my first one.. didn't want to get ahead of myself and spoil what unfolds
but there wasn't always something to find. Still a really cool game. I had some rendering issues with vegas
anything above 1080-24 would crash vegas, read on a forum my issues might've been a specific codec..
so I uninstalled it, wasn't using it anyway and reinstalled vegas, Got it to render 1080-720 so we'll see how part 4 looks.
Part 5 is the best gameplay though, the game really starts to unfold there.
If anyone is interested the playlist is here: http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLthO--A6Jk53cLc3AmCBe9S3T7Wv6DjWf
Part one on the left, go right for the next part. Starting to get used to it more as I do it more too..
Just letting loose and talking about a game.. pretty fun. Parts will be up as soon as I can get them up.
There's a whole lot tied to the rendering and quality process otherwise they would be up quicker.

[Antwan]

So quick update..
Can't pin what the issue is but some forums say certain file types won't render a full screen video.
Should I really be that considered about a full screen video?
I mean my quality is pretty good for a dazzle right now.
AVI is what I render to and it seems to be going well, the video is cropped but when you fullscreen it
I've got two black lines.
I wouldn't say it's about my progression in editing but more so my understanding of formats
outputs and ratios.
I didn't realize it but I do not capture in 16:9 so I'm not sure if rendering to a 16:9 format would help
it takes a few hours to do it so if anyone knows what might be up I'd give it a shot.
Otherwise, I'm quite satisfied.

[Antwan]

Well thanks for the views people
Got quite a few so far and I assume it's from this forum's traffic
Still trying to get everything perfect, feedback welcome
First Black Ops Voice over attempt
and an outtro by our very own Pawnluv


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZM404eBEMPg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZM404eBEMPg