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shrednbunch
05-21-2013, 06:08 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jYyaKr1D0Wg
Took me a day to film tell me your opinions thanks,
Rise Shred

Monk
05-21-2013, 06:12 PM
film burn mid trick = nono

m.seven
05-21-2013, 06:14 PM
yeah..that film burn was placed pretty badly,but other than that the edit was pretty good.
watch out for those panbacks
liked the hardflip 5-0 and the pole jam 360

oh,and no need to spam the link in the chatbox..vids are getting rare these days so more than likely it'll get checked out

shrednbunch
05-21-2013, 06:16 PM
ya i was trying something different i didnt notice it till it rendered but ohhh well ill know next time and ya I can never get those panbacks to not happen they always sneak up on me

shrednbunch
05-21-2013, 07:20 PM
ohh and btw i was scrolled down so i didnt realize it i was confused on why it wasn't posting then i scrolled up lol

i am a snail
05-21-2013, 08:40 PM
to add on to the film burn placed in the middle of the trick, you did that AND THEN cut out your skater in the next shot with a mid-frame tree, so we still don't know what you did coming out of the manual. if you had done a flip trick or something nobody would have seen it. also when you're doing a film burn, you should chroma key it in instead of just laying the film burn over, it'll turn out much better that way

on top of that, be careful of two other things. one, you're popping out very high on a lot of tricks, which looks really weird. you're also doing a lot of panbacks.

NotedDerk
05-21-2013, 08:42 PM
He's a rise member, ah!

Ayreon
05-22-2013, 10:59 AM
snail and m7 saved me from typing a lot


other than what they said it was pretty good.


body varial ender was nice

i am a snail
05-22-2013, 12:03 PM
He's a rise member, ah!
i only fuckin with rise bowlcuts tho

Tilburr
05-22-2013, 03:14 PM
I just didn't understand the blocking of the trick with the film burn, then using a second angle only to have the trick blocked again by a tree. Other than that I liked it, good shit.

shrednbunch
05-22-2013, 03:37 PM
i didnt turn the opacity down enough i realise that i fucked up on that part

Deacon
05-22-2013, 04:02 PM
Much better man. Ditch the film burn and learn how to stop pan backs at the end of clips and your good to go.

i am a snail
05-22-2013, 04:22 PM
i didnt turn the opacity down enough i realise that i fucked up on that part

you don't wanna just overlay a film burn and turn down the opacity, you want to key it into the clip like you would anything with a green screen. artbeats makes the background of every stock clip a single color so you can do this, it's pretty nice actually.

ItsFJ
05-22-2013, 04:37 PM
i only fuckin with rise bowlcuts tho

bowlcuts for life!

DRDIRKS
05-26-2013, 03:23 PM
First angle filmburn during trick second angle tree in the way:confused:

shrednbunch
05-27-2013, 09:33 AM
if you read the 1,000 comments saying that like ive said i didnt have the opacity down enough i realise that