My Work in progress on 1st solo

[Stuman]

Ok guys I have my intro and my ending and still working on the middle but I
would really like some feedback on how it's coming. I've tried to incorporate
a little of everything from humor, technical, ramp, street, realism and a little
of not so realism so I hope you guys enjoy. I wish I had better vid quality
but I don't have a capture card yet.

web.me.com/dstuart3/Skate_2_vids/WHY_so_SERIOUS.html

If you really rather view it on youtube
youtube.com/watch?v=CS7_0hCsqDg

Also a shout out goes to hardatlurk for making cool graphics.
I still would love a superhero one of some kind if anyone has one let me know.

[Madsser3200]

This wasen't as good as i hoped.. it was unrealistic, and the camerawork needs some work. Keep working and it'll be there

[Stuman]

If you read what I wrote I said some stuff was not realistic.
I find being overly realistic a bit boring. I like to have a little flare
and creativity without going over the top. But I appreciate the feedback.

[Madsser3200]

Year i read that, but i didnt say that i didn't enjoy it. it was a fun watch, even though the camerawork needs a bit of practice

[Stuman]

thanks. some of the stuff was before the filmer pack and then I'm still getting use to the filmer pack as well, I'm glad you at least enjoyed it. It's not completely finished. I'm trying to film some longer realistic lines and gaps to put in the middle.