Cellphone footy montage

[DRDIRKS]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PqgTYr-ZAZ4&feature=youtu.be

Its bad quality because i filmed it with my phone and its my first fake skate video.

Please tell me what I can improve on.

[GSB MLP I-XL]

Honestly not as bad as I thought it would be... Tricks were cool. Next time try to get more so the video can be as long as the song. It sounded like it just got cut off...

[i am a snail]

yeah the end of the video was very abrupt, song didnt seem to fit too well either. seemed a bit too dramatic for such a small edit.