Cold Pizza

[seamonkeymadnss]

My first solo. Shitty, I know but my xbox is broke so I can't refilm. Youtube stole my music. High quality is horse shit.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eNAJurSk3Ig

http://www.wegame.com/watch/Cold_Pizza_seamonkeymadnss/

good night.

[Skatevid2]

enjoyable

as for constructive criticism.. keep the camera in close to help clear everything up, i had the same problem, when you put it on video u can barely tellnwhats goin on.
get some trick variety. there were a whole lotta tres in this one, i got the same problem with nollie flips n full cabs haha.
and keep it realistic too.

keep it up though man.


(add in your description, that you have no affiliation with the music whatever and they should turn it back on)

[Madsser3200]

Nice work.

Alot of 'birding' with the camera.

Keep it down to the ground, where a 'normal' person can be with the camera.

360 flip 180's is kinda unrealistic.

If you wanna make a bigflip, do a variel flip 180.

I enjoyed watching the video, and want to see some of your future work. 4/5*

[seamonkeymadnss]

Thanks guys. I agree with everything you guys say and I noticed it myself when I was editing. the only thing is that I can't redo any of it or get any film because my xbox is broken. I just wanted to make one just to get used to it and to kind of learn how to edit.

don't worry though. i'll fix it when I get my xbox

[Any Isle]

2:15-2:25 was a really, really great line!

Good job overall!