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ntothes412
04-18-2009, 07:22 AM
Check out my new solo. Feedback is greatly appreciated.

No Shame (http://www.vimeo.com/4138030)

Madsser3200
04-18-2009, 08:13 AM
Nice Video..

Camerawork needs to be calmed down.

Less keyframes make the camera move smoother.

And as Pepper said: I like your'e stile.

But, the two last tricks were a little too much.

ntothes412
04-18-2009, 08:20 AM
???
it's working fine for me. that's crappy. try later maybe??
(sorry)

Madsser3200
04-18-2009, 08:28 AM
Edited it..

It is working now..

Check the last post.

quetonto1
04-18-2009, 09:07 AM
on the whole it was pretty good

like madsser said smooth the cam out by using less frames

and some tricks were a bit unrealistic but some were very good

when you understand how the advance free cam works and turn the tricks down a notch it'll be very good

good video though :]

ntothes412
04-18-2009, 06:06 PM
thanks for the feedback guys.

yeah, i haven't mastered the afc yet, but i'm getting there.

as for the last two. i know they didn't fit and were, well, kinda stupid, but i didn't no what to do for an ender so i just went BIG. too big apparently.

my next solo is gonna be based more on tricks i've seen irl.

thebullet
04-20-2009, 11:35 AM
that was pretty good. very original.