The Unknown (New skit)

[Bonksz]

Hey guys, im starting to release short films now. If you have any feedback on what you liked, what can be improved on or anything let me know! Enjoy guys!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gl63hi4aQyY

[Pifachu]

i enjoyed your film, at the start i was a little confuse with what was hapening, maybe work on the intro, the fighting scene was a bit rubish, maybe that was wanted, liked the end

the racist joke was good...

in the end i know nothing about makin film, so take these with a grain of salt

[Bonksz]

Thanks! I understand how it's confusing, this was a bit unfinished cause of the actors schedules and stuff so we couldn't finish the beginning dialogue I originally wanted. As for the fighting we made it up on the spot but I do see how it's not that good. Thanks for the feedback.