Third Time's the Charm

Sup guys, this is my third S2 solo
I tried really hard with the editing to get my tricks on the beat
It is also a rather long'un
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7VSVH4BKKYw

So check it out, comments/criticism

Cheers,
Ell

comments:
nice song... sets the tone well.
that over the fence gap static shot is amazing.

criticism:
i didnt really like the quick cuts to black between some of the clips.
a couple of your lines felt really rushed, which didn't really fit with the flow of the rest of the vd.

overall... nice work man. ;)

Cheers adam
the cuts too black were so that i could get the tricks on the beat
it was my first time using final cut and i want to properly edit a solo
instead of just slapping clips in iMovie and putting a song to it

and some clips were rushed because i was just writing down ideas and them trying and them and getting the first clip i got and not really checking to see if it was clean/looked good

Thanks again

cristism....
id be real nice if you were alil bit closer....
like your just shy of the hot spot...

reveiw...


bone off the wall...whaaaaaa...
fence hop static...most epic shot ive seen yet...easy...
270 blunt....yellow.....WITH THE LANDING HAHAHAH....
tre noseblunt...matix...beautiful....
180 plant side to side...slappys...hhahahah f--- awesome...

very nice sir...
zoom in and maybe drop the cam alil..
but thats my only peeve...

sick...

cheers for the feedback demz
glad you liked it

i guess third time really is the charm
haha

nice video.. the song was madddd chilled out too... keep em coming:o

I htought the editing was good, and good use of the filmer pack. The intro with the camera shake for running up the stairs looked really good, even though it was just the intro.