[Positiv] Debut Video [First edit ;D]

[Old post:Hey, this is a quick video I put together, my first ever recording/edit that I've uploaded that I'm actually happy with. I got the filmer pack too, so its higher quality.

What do you think?]

So... I've looked at the feedback, and taken another shot at this.
Criticism is loved.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5sQ9t...ature=youtu.be

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5sQ9t...ature=youtu.be

I hate to be "that guy" but honestly, I'd highly recommend you look up a tutorial or something on using the advanced free cam, because in all honesty the filming was kind of a mess. :/
Also I'd include more than one line in an edit, it's not much of an edit so much as a filming test when it's only one clip. :P

Edit: also don't push mongo... just don't. X(

pretty much what ^ said.my advice,watch alot of vids and see how other people film.you don't necessarily have to mimic how everyone else films,but it'll deff help you out.i know it helped me when i got into filming.
just keep at it,the more you film the better you'll get at it.good luck

yah this is just an uploaded clip of a line. not an edit. filming was a bit shakey but not too bad. practice a little more.

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Thanks, was expecting stuff along these lines. Just realised I was pushing mongo in it lol, I generally don't pay attention and just hold one button down.

Thanks for the criticism, Advanced free cam sometimes confuses me though, because it wobbles for some reason that I'm not sure of, lol.

Edit: Especially around the fourth and fifth second, it would always wobble, no idea why.

with intense wobbling. just trying deleting the keyframes then see what it does.

Thanks, I'll just try and get some singular tricks recorded and uploaded and I'll put them in a playlist called 'Progress' to see how I hopefully improve.

why set the vid to private?

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Thanks, I'll just try and get some singular tricks recorded and uploaded and I'll put them in a playlist called 'Progress' to see how I hopefully improve.

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never mind a playlist. you might as well start editing too. but them together in a single vid with a song behind it. maybe a quick intro. a shot of ur character and some text.

Right.. well, I've uploaded a new video, its in the original post. Criticism, please :D

Higher quality version being uploaded now.

Just uploaded the higher quality version, definitely a big improvement quality-wise.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5sQ9t...ature=youtu.be

deff improvement filming wise,still room to learn more but you seem to be on the right track.i'd only recommend you try filming closer.
editing wise,you cut quite a few clips short with the transitions you used,so there either leave more room at the end of the clip or maybe start the transition later.
keep at it!

Thanks for the feedback :-D
Yeah, the first time round the transitions didn't seem to be much of a problem, but when I converted it to higher quality it seemed to be a bit different.

I'm gonna edit some multiplayer footage now.

Don't cut a clip when you're still doing tricks.