Skatemare On Carverton's Streets

My first montage. My first real editing video http://www.wegrinta.net/forumNew/ima...ilies/sigh.gif

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mSeZTaMddWs

Any comments? :eek:

It's so uninteresting? :(
I started from zero with editing and i worked two months to do something original but at the same time consistent with my passion for skateboarding.
I wanted a video that shows both my realistic and arcade soul. I have thought of doing a kind of short film where i divided reality (my realistic soul) and nightmare (my arcade soul). All with a splatter and ironic final.

I hope I have done a good job, whereas it is my absolute first work :(

A 15 minute solo? wow.

I believe the only reason you haven't had a reply for two days is because nobody recognizes you, not to sound 'high and mighty' over you, but the community tends to watch people they know and like to watch more then anyone else. Some people just don't come back to visit for days, weeks, even months might be another reason for 'no comments.'

Review:

The two minute intro isn't exactly exciting to watch, they are nice scenery shots, but drawn out way too long. The watermarks will throw others off from watching your video as well, along with the fact of the easy mode watermark being in some of the clips.

The cameras' need some work, but not bad. An example of a bad clip, in my opinion, is at 2:12, you split the clip into three separate angles, none of which shows off the entire trick, it's nice to see the entire thing in one, not to mention easier for you to upload it. You also film quite far away from your skater, getting as close as possible without cutting your skater out is the main thing to filming, again in my opinion. The ramping is another issue, not sure if you have the skate.create pack, but it adds the in game ramping which makes it alot easier to slowmo the parts you want without dropping the framerate and such, either that or use after effects, but I have no idea how to ramp clips with that program.

Smith, fs shuv to front board on the rail was sick at the ghetto park.
9:27 was so sick, hippie jump to skinny, loved it.
never hippie jumped a suv the long way, wow.
hippie jump to boardslide was dope.
wallride was ridiculous, but made me laugh.
mortal kombat fatality? haha.

the dreaming idea was pretty cool, but the video was just way too long.
Overall I give it a 3 out of 5 stars, if ratings mattered, hah.
but nice video and keep at it.

Going to be honest here..
Someone did a movie like this with a very similar theme on Skate.2
Not saying you were around then, doubtable even..
and I hate to say originality is what people want, seeing I don't get comments on my videos..
but you know.. if you're having fun, whatever.
Try making some shorter videos first.. I got 3 minutes in and couldn't finish..
Progression felt slow and random.

Just my opinion.

pretty long for a first vid sheesh you have more patients than me guy
good job....