DJMack's SBHS(Coming Soon)(Xbox)

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08-22-2013, 04:30 PM
DJMackRacer315

DJMack's SBHS(Coming Soon)(Xbox)

Good day my fello fluckers school is in session. I call this Skateboard High School(SBHS). Now the park isn't done from what you can see, but im posting this to get some feedback. Yes I know I have been gone for a while. Got a little to side tracked with GTA V and Battlefield 4, but im trying to finish this park. here are some major changes I've made.

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08-23-2013, 02:38 AM
ay platypus

Come along way since I last saw a park for you man good job!
08-23-2013, 03:59 AM
Yarivpa

It's looking a bit blue and yellow but seems well built! The real problem is that it doesn't feel like a realistic plaza. Maybe you could add some buildings or walls...
08-23-2013, 07:34 AM
FullyFl4RED00

Hey man, some pointers on making this better:
-bright and bold colors are great, but they need to be used in moderation or it completely takes away from the realism. I would make the stairs and hubbas a different color and keep the planters the way they are. I would replace a lot of the colors with more nuetral ones.
-the layout could be improved by making it less symetrical and more complex and diverse. Get rid of some of the stairs and make some different features.
-its a school so make some buildings that are realistic
08-23-2013, 09:52 AM
XImortalDEATHX

Quote:

Originally Posted by FullyFl4RED00

Hey man, some pointers on making this better:
-bright and bold colors are great, but they need to be used in moderation or it completely takes away from the realism. I would make the stairs and hubbas a different color and keep the planters the way they are. I would replace a lot of the colors with more nuetral ones.
-the layout could be improved by making it less symetrical and more complex and diverse. Get rid of some of the stairs and make some different features.
-its a school so make some buildings that are realistic

And probably don't call it "Skateboard High School". That sounds like something out of a old TH game.
12-05-2013, 09:56 PM
DJMackRacer315

Help a rookie out. Give me some feedback.
12-06-2013, 02:31 PM
XImortalDEATHX

Quote:

Originally Posted by DJMackRacer315

Help a rookie out. Give me some feedback.

Really? The 3 of us gave enough criticism to help you out and fix some things how long ago now? If you showed an improved version with our tips I'd gladly try to help you out.
12-06-2013, 03:45 PM
DJMackRacer315

I kind of did take your guys advice but me personally I like the layout of it.
12-06-2013, 03:52 PM
XImortalDEATHX

Quote:

Originally Posted by DJMackRacer315

I kind of did take your guys advice but me personally I like the layout of it.

Then scale things down, add details, change colours, add aesthetics to it, make it more appealing to the eye and add more skatability. All of those can be done to some extent without changing the layout.
12-06-2013, 03:56 PM
DJMackRacer315

okay thanks for the tip.
12-06-2013, 04:27 PM
Yarivpa

Here we like skateparks which are looking realistic. I will not specially like skateparks with a lot of things, but those where spots are unusual. We are searching an atmosphere and that´s what is missing on your spot, whatever the colour of your stairs! You can try to delete some unusefull thing to build some houses, or a school, anything! Then you'll understand that some buildings can give you spots you wouldn't have thought about! The merge glitch allow you everything so i don't want your hubbas in the industrial style, it´s the worst style if used as it is!
Just watch our skateparks, get skills, and come back with something you'll be sure it´s looking realistic!