Spaded Backyard Ramp (XBOX/DLC)

Hello again. This is the second park I've posted. It started out as a backyard half-pipe at night and kinda grew from there.
I ended up adding an indoor vert room and a huge fountain/staircase for some reason. Have fun.
Link= http://skate.ea.com/gallery?contentT...itemId=1913980
View of the house at ground level
http://downloads.skate.online.ea.com...47/1913974.jpg
Rear view of the ramp itself
http://downloads.skate.online.ea.com...47/1913979.jpg
View of the yard from the house
http://downloads.skate.online.ea.com...47/1913977.jpg
Indoor vert room
http://downloads.skate.online.ea.com...47/1913976.jpg
Alternate view of the ramp
http://downloads.skate.online.ea.com...47/1913975.jpg

i booked it,ill skate it later and tell yo what i think

Thanks man. I need some feedback so i can get better at this.

its ok visually i just felt like everything was to close together tho.try spreading stuff out more on your next part

Thanks man. I started by building the shell of the park (floors/walls/ceiling) and then I just couldn't stop until I filled both bars. It does feel crowded because of it.