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deff improvement filming wise,still room to learn more but you seem to be on the right track.i'd only recommend you try filming closer.
editing wise,you cut quite a few clips short with the...

pretty much what ^ said.my advice,watch alot of vids and see how other people film.you don't necessarily have to mimic how everyone else films,but it'll deff help you out.i know it helped me when i...