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    Can I Kick It? Techn9cianforlife's Avatar
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    Default DGK-Josh Kalis Ad..

    This is my first one..only been using photo shop for about 24 hours. Don't be too critical please.


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    i like it.. add some simple borders in between maybe and possibly try flipping the top and bottom sections. Only reason i say that is cuz the eye reads top left to bottom right so you'll be telling more of a story with the add, but that's just getting too critical..

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    Funny you say that..cause I debated on doing that for about a half hour..then decided on making it the way it is. I wasn't planning on this being the final product, so there's still room for moving things around. Thanks for the feedback though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Roccityroller View Post
    i like it.. add some simple borders in between maybe and possibly try flipping the top and bottom sections. Only reason i say that is cuz the eye reads top left to bottom right so you'll be telling more of a story with the add, but that's just getting too critical..

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    I second roc's suggestion. but looks nice already
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    I like it too. Espacially the pic where he's about to jump on the board. Really cool. Also cool to see u here Tec
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    it's not bad.

    BUT the images are squashed. if you hold shift when resizing it'll keep the proportion in tact.
    maybe make the text smaller, and keep in mind story telling in the layout.

    sorry if that sounds super critical, but that comes with studying graphic design and having tutors tear my work apart to my face.

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    That's pretty cool dude. The tricks look nice. It could use a few tweaks...basically what adda said.

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