My first EVAH solo video :)

[Einimoe]

Hey,
I'm very new to this type of community and I've been looking around the forums and I think I've got the idea. I made this video in a couple of days but to be honest I could've worked harder on it. The only reason I haven't is so that I can get some critisism as soon as possible, just to make sure I'm doing everything alright.

Any feedback is appreciated,
-Einimoe

[MarcoPoloUSN]

It's nice to see new names popping up.

The greatest advice I can give you is to stick around.
Some members of fluckit check in daily, before anything else (emails, Facebook etc.).
Stick around, watch other videos, observe and learn.

[Einimoe]

Thanks, to be honest just looking around on fluckit made me want to make this

[fallingskyline]

first of all, what marco said

second, there's so much space for improvement, what is clear since this was your first one some things to make it better next time:

- get rid of the watermarks
- try to make the cam go more fluid, its kinda "choppy" on some clips
- some may say this was a bit over the top / too arcade (which i honestly do not give a f..k about)
- try to get a bit closer to your skater without cutting off heads or torsos
- maybe play around with wide- and fisheye-shots (there are a lot of tuts on youtube)

and please for my sake do not ever use rhcp again

but dope to see some new blood in here

[Einimoe]

- get rid of the watermarks
- try to make the cam go more fluid, its kinda "choppy" on some clips

How would I go about getting rid of the watermarks? I tried all sorts of stuff but it just made it look crappy

p.s. I did attempt to make it quite realistic but the end was just for fun and I am watching other people's footage to pick up some ideas

[xxCALM KILLERxx]

The only thing i noticed i had a problem with too: Try not to cut out the beginning or ending of your tricks.
that is all