Looks like a sick park. You show a lot of promise, if only you were around sooner.

Only major advice to give is to stop the panbacks. You had a few really nasty ones in there. Trick selection was sweet, but you had a few boring small gaps. It works as filler, especially for a video you like this, but if you spend more time making every clip the same quality as your more creative ones, it'll take you far. In the end though, it's your video, your style, so skate how you want