[Positiv] Debut Video [First edit ;D]

[Ayreon]

Thanks, I'll just try and get some singular tricks recorded and uploaded and I'll put them in a playlist called 'Progress' to see how I hopefully improve.

never mind a playlist. you might as well start editing too. but them together in a single vid with a song behind it. maybe a quick intro. a shot of ur character and some text.

[Air]

Right.. well, I've uploaded a new video, its in the original post. Criticism, please

Higher quality version being uploaded now.

[Air]

Just uploaded the higher quality version, definitely a big improvement quality-wise.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5sQ9t...ature=youtu.be

[m.seven]

deff improvement filming wise,still room to learn more but you seem to be on the right track.i'd only recommend you try filming closer.
editing wise,you cut quite a few clips short with the transitions you used,so there either leave more room at the end of the clip or maybe start the transition later.
keep at it!

[Air]

Thanks for the feedback :-D
Yeah, the first time round the transitions didn't seem to be much of a problem, but when I converted it to higher quality it seemed to be a bit different.

I'm gonna edit some multiplayer footage now.

[jerr bear]

Don't cut a clip when you're still doing tricks.