someone's getting defensive....
and if you had actually read my original post past a sideways glance you'd see that i actually complimented you. all i said was i didn't like the instrumental choice.
Originally Posted by read this postOriginally Posted by read this postOriginally Posted by read this postyou have a victim complex. not everyone actively hates you despite what you may think.Originally Posted by read this post
Haven't been doing much lately..
My old stuff is dead and gone but I'm ready for that new!
Had a lot of feedback in my time making quick flows, now it's just time to step up man.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ztSW7...VuAVD-CgM3Ju2L
you obviously do, you're actively trying to create a situation where people will persecute you. it's like you don't even read any responses and just assume that someone is either complimenting you or slamming you based on username alone. i wasn't trying upset at all, but you actively try to start shit and when shit gets started you just scream HATER LOL FAILTROLLS as loud as you can instead of defending any position. you wouldn't even HAVE to defend a position if you didn't start your shit in the first place.
Actually not bad. Good flow but I can't decipher half the lyrics. And the composition completely lacks dynamics. The energy is pretty much locked at 8 the whole time. It will get better with more experience in songwriting.
And yeah, I remember you as a fucking retarded troll from the Kid's Table. But I'm gonna shoot you straight on this. Good luck.
Snail. Shut up and go post a senseless paragraph somewhere else please. if anyone seems to be defending nothing it's you. If you read the first comment it's obviously hate filled. I was laughing it off as usual and you come in here acting like its serious. Some people in here are really funny to me. Stop being so dramatic. Lol
Out B.
Last edited by IBS0L0ADED; 05-30-2013 at 10:30 PM.
Kids Table! Exactly. Kids will be kids.
Out B.
Never heard of you before, I have worked with rap music before though so I was interested in listening. The mix is pretty bad off the bat, the beat is drowning out the vocals which are a little muffled and hard to understand as it is. The first guy has a pretty good flow, no real complaints on the rapping part aside from the lack of being able to understand most of it, didn't really enjoy the second guy as much, the flow wasn't as natural and some of the parts where he tried to draw out his delivery just sounded too forced for something that's meant to be stylish.
The instrumental just isn't my cup of tea at all, but it is good for what it is, like I said before there are a lot of issues in the mixing, the sound recording also doesn't sound incredibly clean but those are things that could be cleaned up easily. Wasn't bad but certainly wasn't the greatest thing I've heard or all that memorable, keep doing your thing though you can't win if you don't play the game.