Haven't been doing much lately..
My old stuff is dead and gone but I'm ready for that new!
Had a lot of feedback in my time making quick flows, now it's just time to step up man.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ztSW7...VuAVD-CgM3Ju2L
you obviously do, you're actively trying to create a situation where people will persecute you. it's like you don't even read any responses and just assume that someone is either complimenting you or slamming you based on username alone. i wasn't trying upset at all, but you actively try to start shit and when shit gets started you just scream HATER LOL FAILTROLLS as loud as you can instead of defending any position. you wouldn't even HAVE to defend a position if you didn't start your shit in the first place.
Actually not bad. Good flow but I can't decipher half the lyrics. And the composition completely lacks dynamics. The energy is pretty much locked at 8 the whole time. It will get better with more experience in songwriting.
And yeah, I remember you as a fucking retarded troll from the Kid's Table. But I'm gonna shoot you straight on this. Good luck.
Snail. Shut up and go post a senseless paragraph somewhere else please. if anyone seems to be defending nothing it's you. If you read the first comment it's obviously hate filled. I was laughing it off as usual and you come in here acting like its serious. Some people in here are really funny to me. Stop being so dramatic. Lol
Out B.
Last edited by IBS0L0ADED; 05-30-2013 at 10:30 PM.
Kids Table! Exactly. Kids will be kids.
Out B.
Never heard of you before, I have worked with rap music before though so I was interested in listening. The mix is pretty bad off the bat, the beat is drowning out the vocals which are a little muffled and hard to understand as it is. The first guy has a pretty good flow, no real complaints on the rapping part aside from the lack of being able to understand most of it, didn't really enjoy the second guy as much, the flow wasn't as natural and some of the parts where he tried to draw out his delivery just sounded too forced for something that's meant to be stylish.
The instrumental just isn't my cup of tea at all, but it is good for what it is, like I said before there are a lot of issues in the mixing, the sound recording also doesn't sound incredibly clean but those are things that could be cleaned up easily. Wasn't bad but certainly wasn't the greatest thing I've heard or all that memorable, keep doing your thing though you can't win if you don't play the game.
Thank you for listening and taking your time to tell me your thoughts. You are right, the mix needs to be leveled. Vocals are gonna come up a lil and it will blend. We recorded this in the studio he mixed it quick cuz we were in a hurry. So levels will def be first thing fixed. I appreciate your honesty and will take everything I hear into consideration. Btw, I am the second guy, lol. Its a really quick beat and needs a lot of energy but I see where your coming from. Final cut will be crisp tho. Thank again for peepin it.
Out B.