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    Yes like thrasher and their videos don't all have b-rolls or exist to showcase a park, they actually rarely have either of those. And this is like the only video that I didn't sync to because I wanted to focus on the trick order while the song had a nice vibe to go along. All of my others sync with their songs.

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    Like so, I like doing this kind of approach more than say the "pretty sweet" kinda approach where the focus is more on planned out filming and tons of editing

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    Word, I feel you, well my comment about improving tricks and filming still stands. Peace, hope I see some progress.

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    shr3ddy don't listen to these fools, keep doing what your doing

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    i can respect the sheer amount of content you seem to put out, i'm sure not anywhere near that motivated (my last video is almost a year old now lmao) but i think what nj's trying to say is that, i dunno, sometimes clips feel somewhat sporadic? like you didn't really have a set idea of what you had wanted to do in a line and were just kinda messing around as opposed to sitting down and planning out runs, so there'll be a weird-looking pop out of a grind or slide or a kind of awkward looking push in the middle of a line, or a strange-looking that could easily be fixed with a couple more tries that was glossed over in favor of "ehh i got the rest of it." ill's line at :23 is kind of an example of that; after the varial down the stairs he lost a lot of momentum and had to really quickly push to get to the ledge he did the crook on, when he probably could have gone back and tried the line again, maybe taking the crook out of the line so he could afford time to push and still hit the bank. your line with the shuv crook on the bench comes to mind as well, with the really high and sideways pop out at the end, it would have probably looked a lot better to just ride it out.

    that isn't to say you can't do the thrasher style edits, people have been doing em for years, but it's very easy to tell the difference between a video that's planned out and a video that's quickly slapped together, and even the ones that don't SEEM like they take a lot of effort to do still require a little bit of careful planning, and THAT'S what i think nj was trying to say.

    that said, i think my favorite part of this whole video was that section on the corner wall, ryan's blunt flip out was absolutely perfect, and i really liked the revert to noseblunt you did too. that wallie 180 off the hubba was some guth shit. ryan's got those tail 3shuv's on lock now, and the crook to 5-0 on the hubba was a great way to end this. your filming has gotten noticeably better too, but there were a couple panbacks and sudden starts and stops that were a little jarring. keep it up though, i like what you're doing.

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    ^^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryantergalactic View Post
    shr3ddy don't listen to these fools, keep doing what your doing
    fools? LOL if you can't take constructive criticism from people that are more experienced then GO ON WITCHA BAD SELF! peace rise

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    Quote Originally Posted by itsNJ View Post
    fools? LOL if you can't take constructive criticism from people that are more experienced then GO ON WITCHA BAD SELF! peace rise
    dope NJ

    Structure ALWAYS wins....... ALWAYS!! End of story
    but I do agree with Ryan

    DO YOU BABY!!!!!

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    I can take the constructive criticism about stuff to improve except the whole changing the style of my
    Videos, I see where you're coming
    From with the filming and slapping stuff together, we weren't worried about planning anytbing out it was just a fun session we filmed and enjoyed making, didn't wanna feel like a chore for perfection on every little thing, just homies having fun. It wasn't a serious edit I just wanted to show off ryans park and show of some nice skating in my opinion. And yea that idea for the ender was my idea! I told him to do it and be knocked it out like fucking nothing hahaha but yea this is just a fun edit to keep content posted while I work on that full length, I think you guys will see a noticable difference between these and my giving the editing my all. I do appreciate every comment! I don't want you guys to think I hate honesty! The criticism helps for better videos just like pairs quality pointer, but I like my videos as my own image and unique as opposed to another fake skaters image you know? But like I said I do appreciate the pointers on filming and stuff!

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    Quote Originally Posted by itsNJ View Post
    fools? LOL if you can't take constructive criticism from people that are more experienced then GO ON WITCHA BAD SELF! peace rise
    Rise is the best

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryantergalactic View Post
    Rise is the best
    jk, but NJ theres no need to criticize the tricks ahah its not a solo or anything like that, just a chill sesh, yea the filming was a little wonky at some points but thats about it, im sure it will get better
    I feel like just because your og on this site you think you know your shit but theres no point to put your 2 cents in like putting b roll shit because he was just trying to make it like a realistic sesh, honestly in real skate videos there's not alot of broll if you watch them..
    You never see my criticizing a 5150 video because they have they're own style, like i dont say anything about the floaty cams down sets because im sure they know how they want to film, there's no need so i just give positive feedback

    And prowlin that video you link was like the same as this one ahah there wasnt any broll just a tricks

    My final words are, its just a game so have fun and just be stoked that people are still making s3 edits

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    Ryan there are just some sarcastic things that are still gonna get some heat hahaha and sarcastically calling rise the best is probably on that list ��

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