Critique my first short film?

[Amphan]

Not bad, Bonksz. Angles weren't bad. Some additional angles could've been of benefit and even a little first-person perspective.

I agree with ILL about the transitions being rough, and the fighting being a little weak, but hey, I give you props for doing this. It's not easy, and takes time. Keep it up.

[Bonksz]

Thanks guys, a few guys want a part two so I'm gonna save up for some lights to give it a good ending and spend time on doing better fight scenes. But I just wanted to know what transitions seemed rough to you? It'll be easier to fix the problem once I see which ones are a bit rough.

[ILL NODERUS]

0:29-0:30...0:59-1:00...2:18-2:19 all seemed like troubled transitions. The chase was done well. Nothing else popped out as much as those 3 transitions. You did a lot right, so thats awesome.