Writing is the only thing that will improve your freestyle. The more you work with rhymes the faster they'll come and in time, you'll be able to string together accurate phrases.
I haven't done it in years but here's some of my old tracks.
http://www.myspace.com/ixlhiphop
old psn: jest118
new psn: jesthatesyou
Completely agree..Originally Posted by jest118
Diggin everyone's stuff I don't normally get into Beat-Chemist's approach but It was different, It's good for change once in a while.. good stuff.
Yeah man music can take you wherever you want to go with it just stay focused and work at it whenever you get the chance.
i started writing one a long time ago while i was still riding but never finished it:
Can you hear this? Shouts from the Monk...
and like Pepe Le-pew, I'm bout to blow out some skunk..
now...
Skateboarding and verbal attacks are my premises,
however dislocations and body racks are my nemesis....
See how the speed is the basis, ya know?
because you try to keep up, but yet ya know not what the pace is....
cuz I keep you in stasis, paralyzed....
and that ya know the verbs fly, but yet, hidden is my motive- disguised.
I flow like water on rocks, son; call me Niagara...
ain't "up" to the game? 1. try some Viagra....
i forgot the rest lol...
Last edited by Monk; 08-20-2010 at 10:15 PM.
i lay beats,
masterful feats.
but you and your crew are fuckin cornier than a soup with leets.
me and my niggas are harder than sheets
of sheetrock.
step back and taste the buckshot.
all you faggots ever do is suck the cock.
knock knock. yeah bitch, thats me at your door.
bust it in, and drop your ass right to the floor.
i quickly advance and make a move on your whore.
please her in front of you, and leave her callin for more.
sorry if thats too profane.
Ha doesn't bother me..
it's how you say it not what you say so if that song was emphasized the cursing takes on a whole nother form..
interesting stuff you guys came up with..
Monk why did you stop man?
i dunno man lost interest i guess.... i started it bout the same time i got hurt and had to stop skating and Katrina hit the gulf coast and moved back up to north state........ we used to flow and play M-O-V-I-E on my prep crew at outback when i was the KM down there so i got a healthcare job and really forgot about the rest.
the MOVIE game is awesome and fun to do at work just like skate......
1st person in circle names a movie
2nd person has to name an actor in that movie
3rd person has to name a movie that actor has been in
4th names another actor in that movie etc etc
if someone tries to bluff you can call it once per 2 turns and if they are bullshitting then they get 2 letters...... otherwise you get 2 letters...
best game evur............its great working in a rest on a prep crew n stuff or around a campfire; that passes time in the night when nothing else is around
Hell yeah man.. and camping is the shit too.
Well this is my first attempt I wouldn't say it's a song it has no chorus
more of an attempt to flow/mess with lyrics you can actually hear me breathing in some parts but let me know what you think.
http://www.myspace.com/audioformebee
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