First, the good: Fakie nosegrind f/s flip out was beautiful. Bigflip carlsbad was a nice touch. Crook pop-over first angle was really super good.
I really enjoyed your editing style. Realistic, put the skating to the music (instead of just throwing a track over you clips), easy to watch.
Filming as a whole was quite solid, but the foot going into the camera @ 1:15 is easily avoidable and just looks bad. I wouldn't say there were too many bails, but the ones you put in definitely went on for too long. Cutting the ends of those clips would have been good for two reasons: 1. It's boring looking at a lifeless body on the ground, and 2. It really didn't work with the song/edit. If the bails ended around :23 where the song picked up, IMO that would have been much more natural.
But keep it up, I liked this and you can only improve in the future.
Originally Posted by momadaddy
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