Rap of the Week?

[Demzilla]

write a line...
then match it with the same number of syllables.

that way you go from bar to bar without doing to much over lapping and run offs...
no shortness of breath and plenty of time to have fun...

[Antwan]

Second attempt was me taking advice from someone else haha
can't please everyone eh.. thanks for the advice guys..
I'll keep trying each week not sure I'd call it being serious this is just a side project but I do like improvement.
stay tuned.

[Skatehead]

mad flow my susies...

[Antwan]

Haha.. hell yeah

[Antwan]

If anyone else wants in I guess just post a reply..
it's all about fun.. old, new.. just drop a song..
no ratings.. people will probably give advice if you want it.. could be a decent thing going here.

[Roccityroller]

i'm going to smoke again tonight for the first time in 3 months...

this may happen.

[Antwan]

Hell yeah.. do it man..
I'll probably be smoking tonight myself but I've only been cut off for a week..
oh the perks of working from home.. Baked rap session possible here.. I'll throw down if you do.