Rap of the Week?

[replicant]

Dude, your flow jumped like 10 notches this time around. GOOD show. The geeky critique I have for you: Mellow out your rhymeschemes. You could afford to use a few more words inbetween rhymes and say a lot more to enrich the overall lyrical quality of your tracks. Being an MC is about having something to say, or at least, it should be.

To put it into relative terms: You're going all Haslam on this shit. We need you a bit more Hosoi. Haslam's tech abilities are freaky-good, but you could use some more flowey and showey style ala Hosoi.

Here's my attempt:

I lol'd at the end when you complimented the beat and your words. Nice work man and I agree about message and flow.