Thanks Rep! Back when I fronted a band I was allowed a minute between every song for the random nonsense I'd just come up with. I swear that's how we booked shows. "You're the punk band with the funny guy who raps, right?!" It's an odd complement when you hear more about your humor than music, but fuck, at least people are listening!!!
Speaking of, I'm listening to MC Celtic right now, and I dig. I have to admit, that's almost exactly what I wish my voice sounded like. I have this whole nasily nerd thing going on... Which... Seeing as I'm a total geek works.... But, sometimes I wanna be one of the cool MC's.
And Antwan, you nailed a couple things. Less words means more flow, and you're coming along QUICK. Getting good at this shit is a tough process, 'cause you have to be willing to focus a LOT more on your shortcomings than what you do well so you can improve. Chef Gordon Ramsey was a good teacher for me in this regard. The only feedback he wants is negative, 'cause that's what he needs to work on. I still think praise where it's due, though. One of these days, we should collab a track about fakeskating or something.
Also, if you ever need instrumentals, I have a pretty deep collection. Loves me the bittorrent marketplace.