Rap of the Week?

[DonVigo]

Thanks Rep! Back when I fronted a band I was allowed a minute between every song for the random nonsense I'd just come up with. I swear that's how we booked shows. "You're the punk band with the funny guy who raps, right?!" It's an odd complement when you hear more about your humor than music, but fuck, at least people are listening!!!

Speaking of, I'm listening to MC Celtic right now, and I dig. I have to admit, that's almost exactly what I wish my voice sounded like. I have this whole nasily nerd thing going on... Which... Seeing as I'm a total geek works.... But, sometimes I wanna be one of the cool MC's.

And Antwan, you nailed a couple things. Less words means more flow, and you're coming along QUICK. Getting good at this shit is a tough process, 'cause you have to be willing to focus a LOT more on your shortcomings than what you do well so you can improve. Chef Gordon Ramsey was a good teacher for me in this regard. The only feedback he wants is negative, 'cause that's what he needs to work on. I still think praise where it's due, though. One of these days, we should collab a track about fakeskating or something.

Also, if you ever need instrumentals, I have a pretty deep collection. Loves me the bittorrent marketplace.

[Antwan]

Eh I don't know how I feel about this one
was working on sending a message as well as a "slow flow" inspired by biggie
Several takes and this sounded best.. let me know what you dudes think.

[replicant]

I got a Cypress Hill feel from you rapping that time, but it didn't fit the beat to me.
I think for that style of slow cadence you need a lot of break beats and stutter beats.

[Antwan]

Thanks for the honesty..
still going to post one next week just something I was messing with.

[Antwan]

New concept this week
going with the flow..
as in
I tried to save a bunch of stuff to my phone, which I don't normally do
and by accident I deleted these freestyles
so I said fuck it.. let's go acapella so step up you've got till monday morning
you don't have to do it acapella but I tried haha.. it's all for fun and that's the message here.

And yes.. I am sideways.

[iSomali]

okay i'v got my first track here, hope u guys like it...
its abit personal tho, about my dad passing away n shit

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wPX7GgpXI2s


Constructive critism is welcome, just don't be an asshole tho

[replicant]

okay i'v got my first track here, hope u guys like it...
its abit personal tho, about my dad passing away n shit

Constructive critism is welcome, just don't be an asshole tho

The song was just odd to me. I thought the technique was there, but not showcased. The beat was slow and went with your styling, but 1m 5s of lyrics (all in a row leaves lots of dead space) in a 3m song seems like a waste of a good track. The Harmonic Beats (voice overs, calls, double speak, etc... whatever name you like for them) also I think we're overused to the point that they no longer felt like stress points and went into simple cadence. Overall, it was still a good song, but needed to be about 1.5m shorter or have more verses.

[replicant]

New concept this week
going with the flow..
as in
I tried to save a bunch of stuff to my phone, which I don't normally do
and by accident I deleted these freestyles
so I said fuck it.. let's go acapella so step up you've got till monday morning
you don't have to do it acapella but I tried haha.. it's all for fun and that's the message here.

And yes.. I am sideways.

Somehow this missed my radar. It didn't go that bad to me. Some of it felt rushed, but I'd wager some of that was basically nerves.

[ThaD3UCE420]

I just read the first post and skipped the rest, but i work as an electrician and i cam up with this ryhme.....

Yeah i gotta make a confession,
and teach u a hard lesson,
see im a boss, at this, electrical profession
money in the bank every friday
so high im swerving down the highway

always keep myself on time
constantly commiting crimes
ok and i loose my mind, not pay my fine, fuck you to the pigs ,
all while spitting some lines, smoke a cig, AND destroy every fucking thing!

thats how i swing if you dont like it, suck on my fat ding a ling.

yeah im ThaD3UCE420, making lot of money, people from britian really aren't that funny. :/

[andreas]

fuck it I'm hopping in this for shits and giggles. I'm sixteen so I'm a bit of a squeaker but hopefully you guys can handle it.
edit: just listened too all the tracks, all you guys are really good. saunders, your voice is really ill man. I'm feeling it.

[BaphoM3th]

necro is fucking awesome

[saunders420]

Some new tracks.

Look in the Mirror (Cizzle ft Prhyme)


hook is a work in progress.

Cizzle Cypher pt 2.

[Novel]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G6mNN0gFq2s

http://soundcloud.com/ironyokes/rapage

I've got tons of songs on here.

[Goon_Panda]

Put this on Kickstarter.