The skatefluckit rapper thread v2

[SevenPlyJoyRide]

Here is my first song. im not trying to make anything of a career but i like making music. this is a song i made for my fiancee

[Fecal Face]

Here's my latest feature. I'm Faust, the first one.

[PoppySquidJr]

Aquaman is the best DC hero, fuck everyone who says otherwise.

[andreas]

We made a rap song once for the shits and the giggles. haha

definitely one of the best things that will ever be posted in this thread hahaha. loved it.

[SmurfsInABox]

I'm the blue one in the video

[KRiSPY_ENJOISK8R]

the first song i ever made

[andreas]

we got a good showing here I'm proud of you boys.

[SevenPlyJoyRide]

Here is my first song. im not trying to make anything of a career but i like making music. this is a song i made for my fiancee

Could i get some feedback?

[Antwan]

I was feelin it SevenPly, Nice flow man.

Here's a little preview of what I'm fuckin with
Raw, No Pop Filter, No cut ups, 1 Take, WORK IN PROGRESS but yeah, Doin me

[andreas]

voice needs to be up a bit higher but you've come a long way antwan. sounds pretty good now.

edit: would you guys say this has more emotion than my the first video I posted?

[Antwan]

Thanks Guys.

edit: would you guys say this has more emotion than my the first video I posted?

I wouldn't try too hard to bring emotion in man.. it should be something you just feel on a track.
This is my opinion and I am not the best and likely never will be but just sayin
I don't really use a beat anymore unless I've got a message to send, you've got flow down pack
switch it up, try writing a story or some shit.
That might sound lame but it may help you in those areas.
Play with it, have fun and good luck.

[saunders420]

Woah. so many people doing this now...Wicked Guys! keep it rockin

[KRiSPY_ENJOISK8R]

Woah. so many people doing this now...Wicked Guys! keep it rockin

i guess we were all to shy to actually put our creations on display...

[SevenPlyJoyRide]

I was feelin it SevenPly, Nice flow man.

Here's a little preview of what I'm fuckin with
Raw, No Pop Filter, No cut ups, 1 Take, WORK IN PROGRESS but yeah, Doin me

Thanks man, I like the overall feel of your song. Production stuff could have made it better but the raw version it already sounds really good.