Just played it. Its a decent first effort. Main complaint is the use of the default flooring, no custom ceilings/walls and the use of default CAP pieces (green/orange ledges etc...)
Scale is a bit over sized and the layout isn't exactly spot on, but some of it skates ok.
Like I said, its decent for a first park, but its not great in comparison to"fluckit" standards.
esouthy, take a look at parks on the forum and check the sticked threads, a lot of good tips in there for park building.
Also, learning how to use the merge glitch is a great tool