ok well, I think honestly u need to spend abit more time. (seems rushed, almost as if it's a last bid attempt to advertise ur x games tourney) :P . . . the thing about making montages is, u need to make it look like you were attempting what it is u were doing. So it doesn't look random, alot of flip tricks u can just spin the analogue and mostly come up with something plausable, but grinding if u can purposely land a backside tailslide and when people watch it back and know that that was the trick intended then that helps in terms of realism.