Never heard of you before, I have worked with rap music before though so I was interested in listening. The mix is pretty bad off the bat, the beat is drowning out the vocals which are a little muffled and hard to understand as it is. The first guy has a pretty good flow, no real complaints on the rapping part aside from the lack of being able to understand most of it, didn't really enjoy the second guy as much, the flow wasn't as natural and some of the parts where he tried to draw out his delivery just sounded too forced for something that's meant to be stylish.

The instrumental just isn't my cup of tea at all, but it is good for what it is, like I said before there are a lot of issues in the mixing, the sound recording also doesn't sound incredibly clean but those are things that could be cleaned up easily. Wasn't bad but certainly wasn't the greatest thing I've heard or all that memorable, keep doing your thing though you can't win if you don't play the game.