DJMack's SBHS(Coming Soon)(Xbox)

[FullyFl4RED00]

Hey man, some pointers on making this better:
-bright and bold colors are great, but they need to be used in moderation or it completely takes away from the realism. I would make the stairs and hubbas a different color and keep the planters the way they are. I would replace a lot of the colors with more nuetral ones.
-the layout could be improved by making it less symetrical and more complex and diverse. Get rid of some of the stairs and make some different features.
-its a school so make some buildings that are realistic

[XImortalDEATHX]

Hey man, some pointers on making this better:
-bright and bold colors are great, but they need to be used in moderation or it completely takes away from the realism. I would make the stairs and hubbas a different color and keep the planters the way they are. I would replace a lot of the colors with more nuetral ones.
-the layout could be improved by making it less symetrical and more complex and diverse. Get rid of some of the stairs and make some different features.
-its a school so make some buildings that are realistic

And probably don't call it "Skateboard High School". That sounds like something out of a old TH game.

[DJMackRacer315]

Help a rookie out. Give me some feedback.

[XImortalDEATHX]

Help a rookie out. Give me some feedback.

Really? The 3 of us gave enough criticism to help you out and fix some things how long ago now? If you showed an improved version with our tips I'd gladly try to help you out.

[DJMackRacer315]

I kind of did take your guys advice but me personally I like the layout of it.

[XImortalDEATHX]

I kind of did take your guys advice but me personally I like the layout of it.

Then scale things down, add details, change colours, add aesthetics to it, make it more appealing to the eye and add more skatability. All of those can be done to some extent without changing the layout.

[DJMackRacer315]

okay thanks for the tip.