DJMack's SBHS(Coming Soon)(Xbox)

[DJMackRacer315]

Good day my fello fluckers school is in session. I call this Skateboard High School(SBHS). Now the park isn't done from what you can see, but im posting this to get some feedback. Yes I know I have been gone for a while. Got a little to side tracked with GTA V and Battlefield 4, but im trying to finish this park. here are some major changes I've made.

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[ay platypus]

Come along way since I last saw a park for you man good job!

[Yarivpa]

It's looking a bit blue and yellow but seems well built! The real problem is that it doesn't feel like a realistic plaza. Maybe you could add some buildings or walls...

[FullyFl4RED00]

Hey man, some pointers on making this better:
-bright and bold colors are great, but they need to be used in moderation or it completely takes away from the realism. I would make the stairs and hubbas a different color and keep the planters the way they are. I would replace a lot of the colors with more nuetral ones.
-the layout could be improved by making it less symetrical and more complex and diverse. Get rid of some of the stairs and make some different features.
-its a school so make some buildings that are realistic

[XImortalDEATHX]

Hey man, some pointers on making this better:
-bright and bold colors are great, but they need to be used in moderation or it completely takes away from the realism. I would make the stairs and hubbas a different color and keep the planters the way they are. I would replace a lot of the colors with more nuetral ones.
-the layout could be improved by making it less symetrical and more complex and diverse. Get rid of some of the stairs and make some different features.
-its a school so make some buildings that are realistic

And probably don't call it "Skateboard High School". That sounds like something out of a old TH game.

[DJMackRacer315]

Help a rookie out. Give me some feedback.