I always have my Elgato set to about -6 or -7db if I'm planning on using the footage with any music. Always make sure the levels aren't peaking into the red in your editing software or too far off from each other.
Which program(s) are you using?

I'm not sure if the cutouts at 34/37sec were intentional or not, and I think the bench shot would've been better before the trick to show what spot you're about to hit.

Overall, I enjoyed the edit. Loved the intro, filming was really smooth. I'm sure it was a quick edit because throwaway, so you can ignore all of these tips above if you'd like