Critique my gun shot effect?

[Bonksz]

First time i ever tried to do a gun shot effect, im trying to practice the effect before i do the short film with gun shots. https://www.dropbox.com/s/zrr95rctcz...ffect.mp4?dl=0
Sorry for a dropbox link and not a youtube link. Hopefully it isn't a hassle for you guys

[bohemian]

good enough to sell the illusion. try using higher and louder sounds, guns are loud!