ok, here's what's up....is it a promo for a video called "maiden manhattan"? like is that gonna be the title for the video this is a promo for?
it wasn't bad, but it was a little misleading.
you had the song, and that was it...."maiden america" would have worked as well (and you could have used whoopi goldberg and ted danson, and maybe showed some dancin to play on HIS name), since there wasn't really anything else relating to the title (except the title card, but you just whipped that up in photoshop to illustrate the play on words)
it wasn't bad and im just trying to give constructive criticism....but the title implies things (not sure what, tho) that weren't in the video...ie. the joke was a stretch
i would have called "madien one night" or something....
but not bad for a promo