The Unknown (New skit)

[Bonksz]

Hey guys, im starting to release short films now. If you have any feedback on what you liked, what can be improved on or anything let me know! Enjoy guys!

[Pifachu]

i enjoyed your film, at the start i was a little confuse with what was hapening, maybe work on the intro, the fighting scene was a bit rubish, maybe that was wanted, liked the end

the racist joke was good...

in the end i know nothing about makin film, so take these with a grain of salt

[Bonksz]

Thanks! I understand how it's confusing, this was a bit unfinished cause of the actors schedules and stuff so we couldn't finish the beginning dialogue I originally wanted. As for the fighting we made it up on the spot but I do see how it's not that good. Thanks for the feedback.