Amphan - thanks for taking the time to check it well enough to comment with some constructive advice I appreciate that.
I'm still learning how to use the editor properly I find it hard to get the right angles sometimes I have one in my head and can't replicate it in game for some reason hopefully practice will make it better. I'll be taking the pointers on board for sure. I'm shit at actual editing too , I just cut the clip so you can't hear the in game camera click then join it all up. I know it's amateur lol cheers again fella