OsiRHIS Sponser Me Footage (comments and feedback would be nice)

[OsiRHIS]

A couple of videos I made while trying to get on Pandemic as an AM:

Sponser Me:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=luMqYtOMDWU

Sponser Me v2:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oXONx0FDNyI

Enjoy...please comment too.

[schnavolda]

some things i noticed:
-try cropping to full screen
-try to avoid board cuts when filming. on some tricks half of the board is outside the screen. that's way worse than head cuts.
-cam is a bit too hectic on some shots, at least for me
-try to get some more diversity in the cam angles, like fixed cam position, long lens and so on
-both songs were only half good in a way, because both had weird parts in them that totally didn't fit

you're on a the right path though.

[blackhawk17]

work on that cemera!! too jerky in most shots.
i agree with shnavolda, mix up ur cams, go for some long lense and some 18 mm shots.
also dont change ur mm in the middle of a clip, it just makes it look weird and not as smooth.
u are in the right direction tho. keep em coming

[eastcoastskateboard1]

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