Feedback Wanted

[EmmitBrown]

original music of mine, i'm shitty at getting levels right (i need a new pair of monitors) and mixingdown....feedback encouraged, good or bad as long as it's honest...

http://exposureroom.com/lordlero-whore

the chorus is temporary-ish...as this is a work in progress

[ERIKDOTCOM]

Cool, I liked it..... And I don't like rap.

[joker]

Verbal sound bites rule.

Why are you distorting your voice?


As a whole, I liked it, but I couldn't feel the tempo, it seemed to switch.

Not bashing doc, hell, I couldn't put anything half as good as that together.

[EmmitBrown]

thanks, and nah, it would never sound like you're bashing anyone joker....truth


the tempo doesn't switch, it's because the beat is basically 12 measures long, so where you would expect it to start repeating again it goes on for another 4 measures....


so four bars of lyrics fit over measures 1 thru 8 and then the next four bars of lyrics fit over bars 9 thru 12 , 1 thru 4 and then the next 5 thru 12 at which point it starts over.....

i plan on doing a version of it over a more conventional beat....


sorry for the long-winded explanitorium....thanks for listening to it....


and i use an effect on my voice cause i'm still experimenting with a lot of things and i also don't have sufficient experience on the mic with delivery and such.....

[joker]

I've listened to it again and I see what you're saying.

Since there's no time stamp on the clip, when the slider get's to the other side of the jawline, you start to get fast and furious witht the lyrics. Liked it

[Nelson]

that sounded awesome
just wish the effect on your voice wasn't so strong

[EmmitBrown]

gratze...i'll take that into account.....


this is still the rough version, so i'll tone it down a little....


thanks guys, appreciate it