I watched this days ago, didn't comment
Seems like you want input (wether my opinion is worth listening to or not is up to you)
I can tell by your song selection your prob a good dude, so let's start there. Good tune but not so great for this part. Trick selection was iffy with a lot. Think of what would be possible with your weight and angle and time. Try flicking the sticks a little later after you Ollie. It is much quicker and more styleish. Don't hold your grind/slides so long. Yes it is possible and more impressive in real life, but that's because it's harder. It just looks bad to hold em so long in game, and once again it's harder and more stylish to do it quicker.

Do this or don't worry about views and comments and just have fun and enjoy yourself, later