You've got the quality and sizing right. Looks like you did what I said pretty well. Filming is getting decent. Here is more tips:

- a lot of unnecessary slow mo... ex. 1:59. I suggest that you keep it completely normal speed for now.
- too much movement of the camera after a trick
- 2:27 make sure ya buddies have the filmers pack and keep those watermarks out
- try to be more creative with your spot choice
- your popping a lil too high in most of the tricks
- the edit... cant teach that... you'll figure out better ways to edit

Those are not rules... you can do whatever the hell you want... have fun. Those are just tips that would make the video better in my opinion.