Rap of the Week?

[iSomali]

If any of you can find the instrumental to either:
Hoodie Allen - you are not a robot

or

Shwayze - Buzzin (with hook)

I would appreciate it loads, i've been searching for long but can't find the instrumental to either of them

[Antwan]

Nice Don..
Yeah I dunno man I don't really scout for certain instrumentals
just listen to things until I find something I like and then write to it

quickie since things are picking up..

[replicant]

Ant, a much better flow there.

[Antwan]

Thanks rep
Here's the latest

[DonVigo]

Dude, your flow jumped like 10 notches this time around. GOOD show. The geeky critique I have for you: Mellow out your rhymeschemes. You could afford to use a few more words inbetween rhymes and say a lot more to enrich the overall lyrical quality of your tracks. Being an MC is about having something to say, or at least, it should be.

To put it into relative terms: You're going all Haslam on this shit. We need you a bit more Hosoi. Haslam's tech abilities are freaky-good, but you could use some more flowey and showey style ala Hosoi.

Here's my attempt:

[Antwan]

Nice, Nice..
Yeah man I just got my running shoes on in this thing
Jog before I run.

[DonVigo]

Yeah, kinda. Trust me on this one, if there's one thing my producer busts my balls on it's my word count. I'm finding myself doing more work in editing my thoughts down than I ever do putting them down the first time. I keep telling myself: "I must be fluid. Flow, don't drip."

[replicant]

Dude, your flow jumped like 10 notches this time around. GOOD show. The geeky critique I have for you: Mellow out your rhymeschemes. You could afford to use a few more words inbetween rhymes and say a lot more to enrich the overall lyrical quality of your tracks. Being an MC is about having something to say, or at least, it should be.

To put it into relative terms: You're going all Haslam on this shit. We need you a bit more Hosoi. Haslam's tech abilities are freaky-good, but you could use some more flowey and showey style ala Hosoi.

Here's my attempt:

I lol'd at the end when you complimented the beat and your words. Nice work man and I agree about message and flow.

[replicant]

Thanks rep
Here's the latest

Definitely not bad. I think from :55-the end you did well. Right at :55 you twisted a bit for like 1s-2s, but then got on track and it flowed pretty good.
The earlier parts weren't bad, but with such a smooth jazz beat it felt a bit off with all the breaks.
Keeping the flow going with the beat to me should be paramount. You may also consider tuning songs up octave slightly so they harmonize a bit more with your voice since it's a little high.
Solid improvement though.