Rap of the Week?

[replicant]

I got a Cypress Hill feel from you rapping that time, but it didn't fit the beat to me.
I think for that style of slow cadence you need a lot of break beats and stutter beats.

[Antwan]

Thanks for the honesty..
still going to post one next week just something I was messing with.

[Antwan]

New concept this week
going with the flow..
as in
I tried to save a bunch of stuff to my phone, which I don't normally do
and by accident I deleted these freestyles
so I said fuck it.. let's go acapella so step up you've got till monday morning
you don't have to do it acapella but I tried haha.. it's all for fun and that's the message here.

And yes.. I am sideways.

[iSomali]

okay i'v got my first track here, hope u guys like it...
its abit personal tho, about my dad passing away n shit

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wPX7GgpXI2s


Constructive critism is welcome, just don't be an asshole tho

[replicant]

okay i'v got my first track here, hope u guys like it...
its abit personal tho, about my dad passing away n shit

Constructive critism is welcome, just don't be an asshole tho

The song was just odd to me. I thought the technique was there, but not showcased. The beat was slow and went with your styling, but 1m 5s of lyrics (all in a row leaves lots of dead space) in a 3m song seems like a waste of a good track. The Harmonic Beats (voice overs, calls, double speak, etc... whatever name you like for them) also I think we're overused to the point that they no longer felt like stress points and went into simple cadence. Overall, it was still a good song, but needed to be about 1.5m shorter or have more verses.

[iSomali]

The song was just odd to me. I thought the technique was there, but not showcased. The beat was slow and went with your styling, but 1m 5s of lyrics (all in a row leaves lots of dead space) in a 3m song seems like a waste of a good track. The Harmonic Beats (voice overs, calls, double speak, etc... whatever name you like for them) also I think we're overused to the point that they no longer felt like stress points and went into simple cadence. Overall, it was still a good song, but needed to be about 1.5m shorter or have more verses.

I got a 2nd verse for this track, i've already pre-recorded it but it doesnt quite fit without a chorus/hook but i cannot sing and cannot think of anything to make a good chorus

[Antwan]

Something I was messing with..
Haha the voice at the end is actually my own came out hilarious.

[replicant]

New concept this week
going with the flow..
as in
I tried to save a bunch of stuff to my phone, which I don't normally do
and by accident I deleted these freestyles
so I said fuck it.. let's go acapella so step up you've got till monday morning
you don't have to do it acapella but I tried haha.. it's all for fun and that's the message here.

And yes.. I am sideways.

Somehow this missed my radar. It didn't go that bad to me. Some of it felt rushed, but I'd wager some of that was basically nerves.

[ThaD3UCE420]

I just read the first post and skipped the rest, but i work as an electrician and i cam up with this ryhme.....

Yeah i gotta make a confession,
and teach u a hard lesson,
see im a boss, at this, electrical profession
money in the bank every friday
so high im swerving down the highway

always keep myself on time
constantly commiting crimes
ok and i loose my mind, not pay my fine, fuck you to the pigs ,
all while spitting some lines, smoke a cig, AND destroy every fucking thing!

thats how i swing if you dont like it, suck on my fat ding a ling.

yeah im ThaD3UCE420, making lot of money, people from britian really aren't that funny. :/

[Antwan]

thats funny deuce keep writing

Here's my playlist so far

http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list...eature=mh_lolz

[saunders420]

alright ladies Ive got a challenge for everyone who wants to participate, rap on top of this instrumental http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=23aL_Ver36k
post your outcome. I'll drop my own video as well. hopeful we can get a bunch of people rappin on it.

[andreas]

fuck it I'm hopping in this for shits and giggles. I'm sixteen so I'm a bit of a squeaker but hopefully you guys can handle it.
edit: just listened too all the tracks, all you guys are really good. saunders, your voice is really ill man. I'm feeling it.

[BaphoM3th]

necro is fucking awesome

[saunders420]

Some new tracks.

Look in the Mirror (Cizzle ft Prhyme)


hook is a work in progress.

Cizzle Cypher pt 2.

[replicant]

I liked Mirror the best. Only issues I had honestly was the intro being 1m
of a dead loop got old and it needed a better break (like the banter in pt 2)
between you guys. Nice production overall.

[saunders420]

I liked Mirror the best. Only issues I had honestly was the intro being 1m
of a dead loop got old and it needed a better break (like the banter in pt 2)
between you guys. Nice production overall.

yeah the hook goes in at the beginning as well. just need more time to work on the track.

[Novel]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G6mNN0gFq2s

http://soundcloud.com/ironyokes/rapage

I've got tons of songs on here.

[Novel]

[Novel]

So this and the one above I did in a shitty manner. I keeps my shit pretty diverse I could do styles all day
don't forget to check the soundcloud linkage.

[Novel]

http://soundcloud.com/ironyokes/math-on-windows folks seem to like this one I guess...
check me out here too: http://soundcloud.com/sexsexsex/color-in-the-lines

Sexsexsex is to my music under the moniker; "Sex & Ice Cream", where when I turned 25 I couldn't stand hip hop any longer and had gone through hundreds of variations of style and prose and decided I wanted to just be a douche and sing about girls being the devil. so I'm talking to myself at this point.

[Goon_Panda]

Put this on Kickstarter.

[andreas]

Hey there guys I finally recorded something, except this doesn't really count. oh well it's still my music.

[andreas]

And another one. new channel so if you could please subscribe or something.