Rap of the Week?

[Duce NLS]

then I just clearly won the rap battle.

I'm sorry, that was what you put forward for a battle?

Your rhymes'; straight ridiculous, I put more than my dick in this,
You forgot your brain but my souls in the thick o' this,

You step to me boy, you better bring a ladder,
You come full clip?; Child that shit don't even matter,

You're a wigga with an attitude, I don't mean to be rude,
But WWA? To me that shit sounds really crude,

You couldn't spit it like I hit, my lyrics metaphysic-
-cull; your crew, blazing phillies like you smoke dick,

Fuck tha police, bitch please, don't make me laugh,
I can see you bent on hood, face down, truncheon in ass,

You buzz around here like you're gonna hand out a bee sting,
Sit your ass down, ill show you how to do the g thing.

If there's one thing I can't stand its bitches bringing heat,
So do your pussy ass a favour and just admit defeat.

Peace

[Duce NLS]

yo i was free stylin' and sorry again DuceNLS but i didn't even read what you wrote

So was I.

And no, you read it, you've got fuck all to say and don't know how to act without looking like a tool so you'll pretend you didn't read it.

You are beyond pathetic.

[Duce NLS]

DuceNLS what does free styling mean in hip hop?

Spitting off the top of your head. My speciality.

Sounds funny but I teach my kids about poetry by freestying slowly to them about stuff around them, teach them how to paint a picture with words.

Again, Thadeuce, you clearly have no comeback so your voice just fell to silence imo.

Sit quietly little boy. This is the big boys table.

[Antwan]

Battles would be cool
if controlled in some type of media
like video to video.

No disrespect fellas
Was just saying you can be nice about your advice..
not oh Antwan sucks mad ballwz but still posts..
I get it, I'm not offended I was just trying to make that point
and it got strung way the fuck out.

and don't care for your opinion but you can post it.. feel free to say antwan sucks..
join the fuckin club cut ya up like a wolverine, bub.

[Duce NLS]

Battles would be cool
if controlled in some type of media
like video to video.

No disrespect fellas
Was just saying you can be nice about your advice..
not oh Antwan sucks mad ballwz but still posts..
I get it, I'm not offended I was just trying to make that point
and it got strung way the fuck out.

and don't care for your opinion but you can post it.. feel free to say antwan sucks..
join the fuckin club cut ya up like a wolverine, bub.

That's cool dude, I apologise if I went too far, I will try and point more positively for you. No offence meant.

I had a random idea, n by all means tell me to fuck off, but you seem to struggle lyrically in some points, maybe you could message me some ideas for lines etc n ill see if I can help tidy it up any?

Not that I'm anything special, just offering a hand.

[Antwan]

I'll let you know dude..
that actually doesn't sound half bad
I'm working with something now
but sometimes it can take me a week to write something
depends what I get into.

[Duce NLS]

I'll let you know dude..
that actually doesn't sound half bad
I'm working with something now
but sometimes it can take me a week to write something
depends what I get into.

Cool man, well send me whatever you've got when you're ready, n give me a clue of what sort of tempo/style you're going for n ill see what I can do, don't worry about sending me your rough drafts, ill have a nose.

Peace

[B4NE1]

a little unpolished track me and a buddy worked on close to 10 years ago

My boy Dusk is on the hook


http://youtu.be/h16EVkxovPc

[Duce NLS]

Ok DuceNLS

Much better.

You be a good boy n sit there quietly and I might just give you a chew treat later.

I'm still waiting for an apology, which I would advise you put forwards.

[Antwan]

I thought that was pretty sick Bane.. First guy Assuming that is you.. reminds me of a kid I knew who made some stuff.. myspace is unheard of now so I'll try to find something by him
who's the second dude, Dusk? Has a nice sound..
There was a lot of empty space toward the beginning but thought the beat was pretty cool so I didn't mind.

How old is the train bomb?
Piece is decent too.

[mamba12]

let's just knock off the shit talking m'kay?

I know you think you're hard cuz you're spitting mad disses in his face.

there's no place for it here.

go to some other fucking website and start shit

last warning

[Duce NLS]

let's just knock off the shit talking m'kay?

I know you think you're hard cuz you're spitting mad disses in his face.

there's no place for it here.

go to some other fucking website and start shit

last warning

Firstly I didn't see any other warning?

Secondly I don't think I'm hard.

Thirdly, you wanna aim somewhere aim for thadeuce,

I don't actually give a shit, the guy slandered my terminally ill wife.

If you make that ok, then there is a bigger problem here than me.

[B4NE1]

I thought that was pretty sick Bane.. First guy Assuming that is you.. reminds me of a kid I knew who made some stuff.. myspace is unheard of now so I'll try to find something by him
who's the second dude, Dusk? Has a nice sound..
There was a lot of empty space toward the beginning but thought the beat was pretty cool so I didn't mind.

How old is the train bomb?
Piece is decent too.

My boy DUSK is not really on the internet... he just does his thing, Ive tried to get him to put his shit out there over the years, he just doesnt..
Mabey Ill use one of his tracks in my next vid, or collab, since thats what im currently working towards...


And yeah, All 3 verses are me, and Dusk is just on the hook.

That train bomb is mabey 2years old... its "king spray" an indie game for 360

Its an old habit. says B-4-N-E-1, its an accronym, lol, you can call me B4