Nice Don..
Yeah I dunno man I don't really scout for certain instrumentals
just listen to things until I find something I like and then write to it
quickie since things are picking up..
Nice Don..
Yeah I dunno man I don't really scout for certain instrumentals
just listen to things until I find something I like and then write to it
quickie since things are picking up..
Ant, a much better flow there.
Bear "replicant" Powell
"I am Shaolin-Style!"
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Dude, your flow jumped like 10 notches this time around. GOOD show. The geeky critique I have for you: Mellow out your rhymeschemes. You could afford to use a few more words inbetween rhymes and say a lot more to enrich the overall lyrical quality of your tracks. Being an MC is about having something to say, or at least, it should be.
To put it into relative terms: You're going all Haslam on this shit. We need you a bit more Hosoi. Haslam's tech abilities are freaky-good, but you could use some more flowey and showey style ala Hosoi.
Here's my attempt:
Nice, Nice..
Yeah man I just got my running shoes on in this thing
Jog before I run.
Yeah, kinda. Trust me on this one, if there's one thing my producer busts my balls on it's my word count. I'm finding myself doing more work in editing my thoughts down than I ever do putting them down the first time. I keep telling myself: "I must be fluid. Flow, don't drip."
That's my issue..
My flow goes up when I cut down word count
I feel I gotta figure some way to combine the two
It'll get there.. I think I'm progressing pretty fast.
Definitely not bad. I think from :55-the end you did well. Right at :55 you twisted a bit for like 1s-2s, but then got on track and it flowed pretty good.
The earlier parts weren't bad, but with such a smooth jazz beat it felt a bit off with all the breaks.
Keeping the flow going with the beat to me should be paramount. You may also consider tuning songs up octave slightly so they harmonize a bit more with your voice since it's a little high.
Solid improvement though.
Bear "replicant" Powell
"I am Shaolin-Style!"
XBL: replicant#2618
Currently Playing: Diablo 2 Resurrected, Elden Ring, Skate 3