My First Skate Solo! :)

[Phobia]

i think your trick choice is fine. All the lines seemed well thought out and the tricks looked legit. Maybe Marco has a more specific trick that I missed though.

thanks man

[rzrfvr]

I really enjoyed this. Good editing, the song fits really well. Everything was chill.

Just a couple of places where the camera was a little jumpy especially when you were swinging it around the skater in a line. For realistic filming, if that is what you are going for, is mostly about making sure that someone could film that way while on a skateboard. Ask yourself this: can the filmer zoom this fast, move this fast and get over or under that obstacle?

I think your filming was really great in that sense, to improve I'd say throw in some long lens shots as well to mix it up.

Trick selection is very personal and also the inherit style you carry. Don't go around changing it for somebody else. All your tricks looked legit. In terms of doing tricks in an order that makes sense I guess my tip would be to increase the difficulty with time if you are hitting the same spot so you don't start out with tre flips and lazer flips but with shuvs and kickflips instead and then show harder tricks.

[Oddity]

That was pretty sick. But your skater made me lol because it looks like he's winking.

[punkinate]

I watched this after reading all of the comments, and I gotta say, I wouldn't worry about changing a thing. Trick selection was spot on, and everything was very well executed. Filming was a little too clean for my taste but that's personal opinion. Your camera work is very smooth, nothin' wrong with that. Keep it up man.

[jerr bear]

Nice man, really good for a first video

I think some filming and pushing could be smoother bet hey, it's just your first.

Waiting for the second(?) one (;

[bohemian]

somehow i dont buy this is your first..

if so, not bad at all

[Deacon]

Nice vid dude very nicely done.

Damn you for using this song though! I was midway through editing a vid to it , oh well I'll switch up and use Hannah instead lol.

I love Freelance Whales. I used "Generator 1st floor" and "Generator 2nd Floor" on two vid before.

[Phobia]

somehow i dont buy this is your first..

if so, not bad at all

haha i swear its my first bro
im not new to skate, im just new to making videos and fluckit
and thanks!

[Phobia]

Nice man, really good for a first video

I think some filming and pushing could be smoother bet hey, it's just your first.

Waiting for the second(?) one (;

thank you
yeah i need to improve on my filming to get it smoother, ive been watching more videos to pick up some tips.
im gonna be working on the 2nd one soon, kinda feeling a Jimi Hendrix song for this one maybe?

[Phobia]

That was pretty sick. But your skater made me lol because it looks like he's winking.

thanks man and hahaha yeah when i do the thumbs ups he like winks and grins lol

[Phobia]

I really enjoyed this. Good editing, the song fits really well. Everything was chill.

Just a couple of places where the camera was a little jumpy especially when you were swinging it around the skater in a line. For realistic filming, if that is what you are going for, is mostly about making sure that someone could film that way while on a skateboard. Ask yourself this: can the filmer zoom this fast, move this fast and get over or under that obstacle?

I think your filming was really great in that sense, to improve I'd say throw in some long lens shots as well to mix it up.

Trick selection is very personal and also the inherit style you carry. Don't go around changing it for somebody else. All your tricks looked legit. In terms of doing tricks in an order that makes sense I guess my tip would be to increase the difficulty with time if you are hitting the same spot so you don't start out with tre flips and lazer flips but with shuvs and kickflips instead and then show harder tricks.

yeah i understand man thanks alot for all the tips.
my filming will just get better
and yeah i know what you mean about the tricks, ill have to change up the orders on the next one.
thanks again!