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  1. 07-13-2011, 11:41 PM #1
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    Talking The Genesis (first S3 video)

    my first s3 video





    feel free to leave tips and criticism
    thanks
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  2. 07-14-2011, 04:44 AM #2
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    not bad for a first vid.
    just need to improve on your filming, filming at 0:47 was weird
    and you need to cut out the last push before and after a trick
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  3. 07-14-2011, 05:15 AM #3
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    I have the same opinion as SK8ERatWAR, and I want to add, keep attention to the rolls back at each ends of your clips, and wordk the angle, some cam should have been a little closer
    But this good for a first vid
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  4. 07-14-2011, 11:59 AM #4
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    Alex and sk8eratwar says everything, realy nice for a first vid ! ^^
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