I think the main point to me is this is menna be a teaser for a part. And with a teaser or a trailer you want something that makes people want to watch. And for me that deffinitely didn't make me want to watch. It's the sort of trick I see little kids do and think they are the shit. You even just said you half assed it. Why not go all out then use that for a teaser?
You say about a Filmer. Why didn't you wait to find a Filmer then try something?

Just saying you post it bigging it up to something it is not, then make excuses when people say it's poor.

I don't get it, but your mentality seems to be lacking behind your age.