Seen worse but keep doing what your doing, Just watch people videos man if you are a skater in real life then you should find more a style you like as for me and Notedderk we do shit we wish we could do or could do !! here is a tuttorial on one style i do in skate 3 its filming style!!
Won't rehash what's already been mentioned. I'll say I like what you're going for and keep at it. One question, everything looked full pop...was this normal mode? (That turned me off)
Cool. Nice work flicking then. I dont think I could do that many full pop tricks, whether I knew about low pop or not. The lows would just happen from not flicking fast enough or not setting up long enough.